hello guyss..
I would like to tell my story
Yesterday at tuesday me and my brother went to three place in Yogyakarta. First, i went to Gembira Loka Zoo, because i could restore my brother in zoo😂😂 After that, we walking around the zoo and saw very much animal. I saw monkey, elephant, tiger, bear, bird, fish, shark, frog, snake, camel, giraffe, and all of the animal in the zoo.
Second place, I went to Tamansari Yogyakarta . Tamansari is one of an old building in Yogyakarta. I was tired but i still happy with him😂😂.
Third place, I went to The North Field in Yogyakarta but I didn't walk around because I very tired. Finally, I just ate in stand side field north. And at 5 p.m clock I came back to my home. On the street, I felt happy and I laugh very loud with him. In home, i felt very happy.😝😉
Your sentences are easy to understand because you use common daily life, and your story is interesting, great work!
BalasHapusThat's nice. Your diary easy to understand. But in the sentence "First, i went to Happy Loka Zoo," the letter "i" should use capital letter
BalasHapusSuch a good diary! You should check the punctuation but it's really good diary tho, because you make me envy about the sad fact I don't have a brother:") be a good sister, Marsha!
BalasHapus